Hi Ngaro it's Kelly I go to Ohaeawai Primary School. I Love your retell story of Matariki and the 7 stars. Maybe you could add a little more Images to add to your story to make it more interesting. Overall I still like your retell of Matariki and the 7 stars. Blog you later Kelly.
Hello, My name is Sunita from Ohaeawai school. My favourite person was Mitai. I think you could add some other images because there was not much but I still think that your story is good. I thought that your first part of your story was interesting so blog you later
Hi Ngaro, Its me Kohl-lee. I just wanted to say how incredible your story was. I remember this story. I had to do the exact same thing for the Summer Learning Journey( I think). The one thing I liked was how you and Hanah told the story in your own words, Now that was pretty amazing. Well Keep up the good work. Blog you later...
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ReplyDeleteit's Kelly I go to Ohaeawai Primary School. I Love your retell story of Matariki and the 7 stars. Maybe you could add a little more Images to add to your story to make it more interesting. Overall I still like your retell of Matariki and the 7 stars. Blog you later Kelly.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Sunita from Ohaeawai school. My favourite person was Mitai. I think you could add some other images because there was not much but I still think that your story is good. I thought that your first part of your story was interesting so blog you later
Hi Ngaro, Its me Kohl-lee. I just wanted to say how incredible your story was. I remember this story. I had to do the exact same thing for the Summer Learning Journey( I think). The one thing I liked was how you and Hanah told the story in your own words, Now that was pretty amazing. Well Keep up the good work. Blog you later...
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